Prompt: Writing is a process, and the first draft is rarely perfect. Strong writers improve their work through revision. After reviewing and revising your literary argument paragraph, what changes did you make to strengthen your writing?

 Prompt: Writing is a process, and the first draft is rarely perfect. Strong writers improve their work through revision. After reviewing and revising your literary argument paragraph, what changes did you make to strengthen your writing?

Prompt Response:  Over all my first paragraph was good. I just had to make stuff less wordy. Add more evidence and that was it. That was all I did I did good on it I'm pretty alright at reading

Summary: I made minor changes

Reflection:  we did essay


 

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